Rock And Roll Acrobatics
Is 'to begin' OK here?
——————- Although the brothers Tielman and The Beatles had never shared a stage, the influence of The Tielman Brothers can not be neglected. George Lipsitz in his book Dangerous Crossroads (1998) stated: "The rock Tielman Brothers and performance nominal and acrobatic actions drew enormous attention. They played guitars and bass with his toes and teeth. Even at some point to play behind head. This action gave them popularity in Europe until they reached their own fans in Hamburg, Germany. A place where they could exert a major influence for the start of the career of the Beatles! "
Yes, "to begin, 'OK, but there are other errors. 1) Put quotation marks around the name Crossroads dangerous. 2) Check your appointment book. Is not there an apostrophe after the Brothers? 3) What is the end of the quote from the book? If the purpose is "… The race The Beatles ", then nothing can change not what the author said.
Rock’n'Roll Acrobatic Dance