Hip Hop West Africa

Help me make my Thesis statement better?
this is what i have so far:
Hip-Hop, which was influenced by the griots of West Africa, has deeply influenced today’s America.
how can i make it better?
That one is easy to to fix by listing some of the ways it has influenced American society.
Hip-Hop, which was influenced by the griots of West Africa has deeply influenced American society through ____ and ____
West African Islamic Hip Hop- Senegal
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Revelation Part 1: The Root of Life $9.49 14 TRACKS: 1) Made In Africa (With Wale And The Cast Of Fela) 2) False Friends 3) Break Us Apart (With Capelton) 4) Can’t Keep I Down 5) No Cigarette Smoking (In My Room)(With Melanie Fiona) 6) Freedom Time 7) Jah Army (With Damian “Jr Gong” Marley & Buju Banton) |
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Many Lessons: HipHop, Islam, West Africa $8.99 … |
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From West Africa to West America [Explicit] $8.99 … |
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Bling: A Planet Rock $2.41 Is there a human cost to getting your bling on? Find out for yourself in this gripping documentary that examines the relationship between blood diamonds and the hip-hop community. As rap greats Raekwon (of Wu-Tang Clan), Paul Wall and Tego Calderon travel to Sierra Leone, West Africa, they come face to face with those directly affected by the dangerous underbelly of the diamond trade. Features ins… |