Hip Hop Havoc Kush
what do u guys think of this?
My friend wrote it and i think its decent but needs a little work, any suggestions…. and yes my friend really did write it, not me
The day masta ace retire
Im’a be a basket case for hire
when guru drop the mic
i just might stop a life
when nas quit, ima pop shit
no questions asked, drop it
if KRS- one dont come out to stop these clowns
i just might dum out and pop some rounds
and its gonna be a hard day
when the rap game says bye to scarface
when commons head stops inlighting me
im gonna bomb a Fed, aint no sense in fighting me
and yo, prodigy
from mobb deep
keep ur head up, ur bid will be up b4 u know it
u have a passion for rap, and u show it
these cops, u know what they say is all lies
i cant wait for u to come back and drop another infamous archieves
and havoc
i was feelin the kush
u two is some of the last ones left
that spit it real in the hooks
i wanna know whats wrong with hip hop these days
im laughen at these faggots
cause hip pop is gay
The message and the lyrics in the song are fairly decent but it doesnt show a regular song pattern. You need to learn more about bars. Like the Mobb deep and Prodigy lines would mos def. need some more words on them if you were to record it. I was really feeling the message though. Tell ya friend to keep it up. Just learn more about bars and how lines are structered in a song.
CLASS BY MYSELF-HAVOC-NITTIE-THE KUSH
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The Kush Instrumentals $8.99 … |
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The Kush (Edited Version) $8.99 … |
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The Kush $15.98 Tracks: 01 NY 4 Life |